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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 8, 2017 1:58:53 GMT
There are two sides to our brains, and sometimes they just do not work together.
One side is "artsy" while the other side is "logical". Both process a ton of information, but I have a feeling
neither one speaks to the other when it comes to making mistakes. So please help out whenever you see a problem
let me know what the problems are.
P.S Submitting screenshots are the best method for fixing errors.
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Post by karmakat on Apr 1, 2017 12:02:14 GMT
okay, this might be a bit "choppy" but I will be writing my comments in the order that I see them.
first of all, hyper should NOT do so many game related puns, it gets old. or you should regroup them
second, the demon guy, most of his sentences could be regrouped easily.
so Wolfstar doesn't realize he is naked? is he a nudist? even when Hyper mentions it no reaction from him...just seems odd to me.
regroup the desert description in one slide. useless to drag it out.
should change "slightest, bit hot or thirsty" as "not feeling the effect of the desert even slightly" it gets repetitive.
"it seems safe to open it. you think i should try to open it..." again repetitive. could be easily put as "think I should try?"
i fully agree with Hyper, Wolfstar inner monologue is far to many slides.
when the monster shows up you misplaced the comma "no magic, no more no, and fuck no" does make it sound too like Wolfstar has Tourettes...
Hyper in the landing scene "ah my back! that smarts!" WHAT did you try to say there???
the sex scene...i kinda hope you elaborate because it wasn't exactly explained. and since they both wanted it, it should be sweeter.
hum Janus i think you wanted to say "mate"
tax collector gorilla (personal guess) smocking cigar was a nice touch.
date with janus
i do enjoy the whole references to legends personally as it always been a passion of mines.
after Janus tells how he died, which brought a pinch to my heart, wolfstar says about finding friends in the afterlife i think you meant it as an inner thought but showed it as a dialogue toward janus
i am sorry but you need to put a different shop owner for lost horizon. to easy to confuse with the bartender lol
in the shop when the guy hands the box from Alex you put "performaning at pleasure island" instead of "performing"
when he closes the shop to tell them about paradise "you two probably won't abuse the knowledge i have give to you" big typo here "I have and can give to you"
here is what i found on THIS PLAYTHROUGH. i will go through it again with different answers to give you further feedback when i have time again.
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Post by Wozzler on Apr 26, 2017 3:05:57 GMT
encountered a bug on the music selection portion when selecting "I'm ready to make a choice" I went with the Evening with Janus and Little Cafe path for this one this error message appears: While running game code: File "game/Day1part2.rpy", line 2558, in script ScriptError: could not find label 'onemusicchoice1'. -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "game/Day1part2.rpy", line 2558, in script File "G:\Pc Files\Games\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1527, in execute rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target) File "G:\Pc Files\Games\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\script.py", line 857, in lookup raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original)) ScriptError: could not find label 'onemusicchoice1'. there's also Wolfstar's floating head while talking with Rufus Attachments:
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Post by Wozzler on Apr 26, 2017 3:24:16 GMT
encountered another by going with Alex and Yggdrasil rest path though I get to proceed by selecting ignore this time While running game code: File "game/Day1part2.rpy", line 1115, in script File "game/Day1part2.rpy", line 1115, in <module> NameError: name 'variable' is not defined -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "game/Day1part2.rpy", line 1115, in script File "G:\Pc Files\Games\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 814, in execute renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store) File "G:\Pc Files\Games\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1695, in py_exec_bytecode exec bytecode in globals, locals File "game/Day1part2.rpy", line 1115, in <module> NameError: name 'variable' is not defined Attachments:
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Post by Wozzler on Apr 26, 2017 9:52:36 GMT
here are a few other stuff I found so far - when the gang meets up again in front of Pleasure Island after a night with Janus, Alex said " This is something I don't even have an explaination for" instead of "explanation"
- when they followed Janus to the Gym and found him spotting for Hugo, Hugo's line involving "you're scrawny ass" should be "your scrawny ass"
- after Panjiah told them about Quintin, "shield" instead of "sheild"
- During Hyper's battle at the Yggdrassil's Rest, he said "Beserker Mode" which I believe is "Berserker mode" instead
- and when the unnamed guy was talking with the TaxMan after Lingering Mind went into Wolfstar, yields is yeilds in the line " yeilds the same results"
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Post by Wolfstar on May 7, 2017 23:54:41 GMT
Thanks for your bug reports Wozzler. All the changes have been added, good eye man! =3
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Post by Wozzler on Nov 15, 2017 17:40:36 GMT
Loving the new update and damn Hugo was such a tease to Wolfstar, and that bench press scene is hot ^^. here's some stuff I saw so far that might assist: 1. ) when Thug 1 is reporting about Alex: "There's noone hiding in the back boss" missing space between no and one 2.) When Hyper and Wolfstar are off to save Alex: isn't that "billboard" over there 3.) When the thugs confront Wolfstar at the cafe: too much of a "coincidence" if you ask me 4.) During Lingering Mind and Green guy's discussion: well aware of our "dilemma" 5.) During Wolfstar's fight with Boss: you have more fight in you "than" your pathetic friend 6.) when Hugo teases Wolfstar: return his "affections" 7.) when Alex is giving the job rundown to Wolfstar: "remember" the number one rule PS: I ignored the various text message format when Wolfstar checked his phone as I believe they were texting while drunk, so auto correct/typos could really kick in.    |
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Post by Wozzler on Nov 15, 2017 17:41:45 GMT
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Post by Wozzler on Nov 15, 2017 17:42:31 GMT
and for item 7  |
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