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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 8, 2017 1:44:34 GMT
Howlies Everyone,
Thank you for your time and especially for leaving any comments, whether good, bad, or indifferent.
I'm happy that you have interest in "Wolfstar: Sins and Paradise" the visual novel. With your help, we
might just make it to the final finished product in the future. I hope this experience will benefit
equally throughout the creation of the project and community alike. I would like each of you to know
that feeling of being a part of something organic, let's grow together, and know that your comments
matter to this process.
Thank you again for your support.
-Wolfstar
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Post by Squip on Mar 8, 2017 2:10:27 GMT
I can't wait to see how this will go! I know you can do it!
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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 8, 2017 2:48:58 GMT
I'm so excited! Working my tail off to get the game ready by the end of the week.
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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 10, 2017 1:47:48 GMT
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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 19, 2017 11:03:30 GMT
Next update for DAY 1 coming April 1st! =3
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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 26, 2017 12:09:11 GMT
Sins and Paradise's First Update coming April 1st
Thank you everyone for your patience. The first update for Wolfstar Sins and Paradise looks good for the April 1st deadline. It's still free, and still going to be available to the public for download; however, the next updates will be for Patrons only. Thank you everyone for joining and supporting me, I wouldn't be able to continue creating without your help, it means so much to me.
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Post by Wolfstar on Mar 29, 2017 9:13:09 GMT
Early Access anyone? Become a patron supporter for Wolfstar and get the visual novel Day1 update download available now! =3
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Post by yy40 on May 15, 2017 4:02:17 GMT
looking forward to it!
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Post by darkheavenofwolves on Jun 19, 2017 22:24:24 GMT
Alright alright ladies, take a big step back! Mr. German Guy is about to show off his engrish skills!
I just wanted to share some of my thoughs about the game so far. I like the funny over-the-top scenario very much, it's like watching a Jean-Claude van Damme/Arnold Schwarzenegger/Rambo-Flick with furries and anime elements. And gay sex. Lots and lots of gay sex. No complaints here, but I got a little confused with the latest public built.
Okay, we knew Hyper has a girlfriend (though I'm pretty sure it was someone completely different in your old pics), but I got some problems with how the story progresses. First of all, I felt little to no emotional connection to her. No, not because she's a woman =P It's because we are only now introduced to her, even though the scene's treated like we already know and love her. I felt like I was playing a completely different game all of a sudden. „Yeah. Okay. Yeah, she's... okay I guess, could we go back to the actual story now please?“ These were my thoughts through most of her part.
Telling a story from more than one perspective is way more challenging than people realise, because:
1. It's harder to stay focused and to follow the story
2. If you fail to be interested in one story line you easily get annoyed whenever it switches
If we would've known Jenny right from the beginning, got to spend a little time with her (and maybe even at least one scene together with Hyper to feel sorry for them to be seperated) we wouldn't only want to know what happend to her after Wolfstar's and Hyper's death, we would have DEMANDED to know. Like „Dammit, they are dead and Jenny's been left behind! Can she help them?“ and we would have known that we'd get to follow the story from her perspective at some point.
But the way it is right now it's more like „Yes Lady! Yes we got it, you like to bang Hyper! Duh, get in line. Now please leave, we were having a good time in Paradise!“
So my problem is, her inclusion feels unnatural. We didn't know anything about the world where Wolfstar and Hyper came from, and that was fine. Because right from the beginning that wasn't important. Both of our protagonists died and were thrown into a new world with rules they didn't know themselves, and we got to explore it with them together.
But now we are forced to accept the fact that there's a new protagonist back in the world we left behind. Suddenly it's supposed to be important what that world was like, and it's even presented like we already knew what was going on there. So I strongly suggest you to rework her story line at some point.
I hope I managed to explain what I meant. I guess you can tell, but english is not my first language.
Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next update!
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